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crit me,
hmd

How's My Driving/Crit Me/Etc?

Charlie is from an extremely obscure novel, so I don't really expect anyone to know her canon. If you happen to have read it, however, feel free to tell me whether you think I have her down!

Otherwise, I would appreciate crit on overall consistency of voice, as well as writing/grammar type things.

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